Sunday, April 21, 2013

Day 21: Roger Zelazny Haiku

The doors of his mouth,
The lamps of his face, Moby
Dick set on Venus


Updated: 

The doors of his face
The lamps of his mouth! There, I

corrected it, Chris!

7 comments:

  1. The doors of his face
    The lamps of his mouth, and not
    the title Josh wrote!

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  2. D'oh! Updated it with a correction!

    Or should I just blame the "Zelazny fans" for pointing out my error?

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  3. Unlike Hurley, Josh
    apologizes, corrects
    all of his mistakes!

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    1. I can't help wonder
      if Josh's wife agrees that
      this is always true.

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    2. The silence of Josh
      is quite telling on this point.
      Say it isn't so!

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    3. Josh is smart enough
      not to comment on this where
      his wife might see it.

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    4. Josh's sage wisdom
      caused me to laugh out loud and
      snort milk out my nose.

      (the third part is poetic license and not literal truth)

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