tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post8078183624064010653..comments2024-03-21T19:03:19.133-04:00Comments on Where there had been darkness...: Day 1: Roger Zelazny haikuJugularjoshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03768939120752611597noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-49203718652467503502013-04-05T08:53:11.279-04:002013-04-05T08:53:11.279-04:00Josh writes some Haiku
And so we wait each morning...Josh writes some Haiku<br />And so we wait each morning<br />for wit and whimsyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-3622249153514121682013-04-02T16:02:19.152-04:002013-04-02T16:02:19.152-04:00I love both the edit AND this bonus haiku. Except...I love both the edit AND this bonus haiku. Exceptional work, Mr. Josh!Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07692070094174090593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-73835554658503923792013-04-02T13:01:33.533-04:002013-04-02T13:01:33.533-04:00I asked my friends for Roger Zelazny haiku, but th...I asked my friends for Roger Zelazny haiku, but they gave me limericks instead:<br /><br />There once was a dude named Zelazny<br />And I fear that you might want to razz me<br />But I've barely read three<br />of his bibliography<br />Though I oft hear from Josh that they're snazzy<br />Jugularjoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03768939120752611597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-88764316541745237112013-04-02T13:00:48.877-04:002013-04-02T13:00:48.877-04:00Yay! Fixed it!
Haiku are easy.
You just stop when...Yay! Fixed it!<br /><br />Haiku are easy.<br />You just stop when you get to <br />seventeen sylla-Jugularjoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03768939120752611597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-73743599552799743532013-04-02T11:42:02.832-04:002013-04-02T11:42:02.832-04:00Your second line has
one syllable too many.
Off to...Your second line has<br />one syllable too many.<br />Off to a great start!Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07692070094174090593noreply@blogger.com