tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post8605181331112252207..comments2024-03-21T19:03:19.133-04:00Comments on Where there had been darkness...: Day 12: Roger Zelazny haikuJugularjoshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03768939120752611597noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-84090524052524996582013-04-13T14:25:00.897-04:002013-04-13T14:25:00.897-04:00Oh golly . . .Oh golly . . .Chris DeVitohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954514417222660623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-29052440465377632932013-04-13T10:06:13.053-04:002013-04-13T10:06:13.053-04:00Chris DeVito loves
the "Song of the Blue Babo...Chris DeVito loves<br />the "Song of the Blue Baboon"???<br />Say it isn't so.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-52665128190189131582013-04-13T09:48:57.505-04:002013-04-13T09:48:57.505-04:00I'm working on one now. I just need to be able...I'm working on one now. I just need to be able to fit "Chris DeVito" and "Song of the Blue Baboon" into seventeen syllables. Jugularjoshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03768939120752611597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-27165144185493583662013-04-13T00:36:19.641-04:002013-04-13T00:36:19.641-04:00Yikes . . . Like someone once said, "Are you ...Yikes . . . Like someone once said, "Are you threatening me?"Chris DeVitohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954514417222660623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-8355065484567764012013-04-12T23:35:49.949-04:002013-04-12T23:35:49.949-04:00Glad to be of service, CDV! And, who knows--maybe...Glad to be of service, CDV! And, who knows--maybe you'll be the subject of some more poetry here before the month is over. We can only hope!Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07692070094174090593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-17315877921981825662013-04-12T21:33:48.792-04:002013-04-12T21:33:48.792-04:00Zach: I believe that is the first haiku that has ...Zach: I believe that is the first haiku that has ever been written about me.<br /><br />I am humbled.<br /><br />--CDV<br />Chris DeVitohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954514417222660623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-3989604869935562782013-04-12T21:15:09.894-04:002013-04-12T21:15:09.894-04:00Hell scores lucky hit;
seagull takes it in the fac...Hell scores lucky hit;<br />seagull takes it in the face.<br />Zelazny aimed it.<br /><br />;-PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-20923839259741986032013-04-12T20:39:54.095-04:002013-04-12T20:39:54.095-04:00DeVito takes aim,
rips apart my dumb haiku.
Brb--c...DeVito takes aim,<br />rips apart my dumb haiku.<br />Brb--crying.<br />Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07692070094174090593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-57728540393238843912013-04-12T20:31:58.597-04:002013-04-12T20:31:58.597-04:00Not to be picky (although if we're not being p...Not to be picky (although if we're not being picky what's the point of this whole blog?) but it doesn't say anything about Hell aiming carefully; he just "flipped" his cigar butt at the gull and scored a "lucky hit."Chris DeVitohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13954514417222660623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-78117698305070894632013-04-12T12:05:00.188-04:002013-04-12T12:05:00.188-04:00Hell aims carefully;
seagull takes it in the face....Hell aims carefully;<br />seagull takes it in the face.<br />What a way to start.Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07692070094174090593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6504598332261057441.post-65123229199299857562013-04-12T05:51:33.168-04:002013-04-12T05:51:33.168-04:00Damnation Alley.
Great book. Terrible movie.
Time ...Damnation Alley.<br />Great book. Terrible movie.<br />Time to redo it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com