Your second line hasone syllable too many.Off to a great start!
Yay! Fixed it!Haiku are easy.You just stop when you get to seventeen sylla-
I love both the edit AND this bonus haiku. Exceptional work, Mr. Josh!
I asked my friends for Roger Zelazny haiku, but they gave me limericks instead:There once was a dude named ZelaznyAnd I fear that you might want to razz meBut I've barely read threeof his bibliographyThough I oft hear from Josh that they're snazzy
Josh writes some HaikuAnd so we wait each morningfor wit and whimsy